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This comes together so well, almost like the words were cryptically but meaningfully written rather than chosen and pieced together. You clearly have a knack for blackout poetry, and I hope you keep experimenting with it! 

As an aside, The Ballad of the Sad Cafe is one of my very favorite story collections. I first read it years ago after The Member of the Wedding, but it's probably time I sit down with it again! On my vintage edition is a woman with a devilish imp sitting on her shoulder; it's the only image I've ever truly considered getting a tattoo of. I've been trying to hunt down the artist for years, which isn't anywhere on the copyright page. Does your edition look like this too?: logan.shopopenbooks.com/product/130032/Ballad-Of-The-Sad-Cafe

Black Out Poetry 8 months ago

Love that first line! 

not a kiss because 8 months ago

"my sacred spot" what a lovely epitaph. I feel thatIt's beautiful tragic and philosophical important that this identity crisis is happening at the narrator's "sacred spot." 

Strangers in the Night 8 months ago

Ahh all the imagery is so unique and tangible! Brilliant job with this. Love the rhythm! 

The Chaotic Misdemeanors of Bluejay One 8 months ago

"Simply being" what a beautiful way to describe the moon. It also, in some ways, gives everything that exists the potential to become a moon. 

The moon 8 months ago

This is so amazing and real. 

1,466,666,666 Women 8 months ago

Thank you! :)

Season of the Witch 8 months ago

You're welcome. I love the song! Also the drawing, keep up the good work. 

Season of the Witch 8 months ago

<3

1,466,666,666 Women 8 months ago

This is such an important topic that affects so many different women from around the world. Adding the calculated number really emphasizes just how massive the issue is. I also love your use of repetition and pacing. Keep up the good work <3

1,466,666,666 Women 8 months ago