What a wonderful Vignette! Love how you really dive into the physical and metaphysical mechanics of the game! Also, clever punctuation! I love a good M-dash moment!
No, no!! Intense poetry is honestly so fun to write and to read, and poems are whatever the poet is feeling and needing to say. If you think they're too intense, you can try stepping back for a poem or two, but I personally think your writing is great just how it is!
Thank you so much! This was actually my Christmas present for my friend group and I'm so glad they all, and you, like it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! This means so much to me <3
There's a gentleness and sensitivity to this piece that give me tender feels. Somehow, you've made crying tragically beautiful. This poem feels like an expression of pure love and acceptance.
Thank you
Thank you guys!
Wow. Astonishing piece. I'll be sitting with this one for a while. Love the title too.
Nice ending!!!! Clever, complicated... sweet.
What a wonderful Vignette! Love how you really dive into the physical and metaphysical mechanics of the game! Also, clever punctuation! I love a good M-dash moment!
Your poetry isn’t too intense at all
No, no!! Intense poetry is honestly so fun to write and to read, and poems are whatever the poet is feeling and needing to say. If you think they're too intense, you can try stepping back for a poem or two, but I personally think your writing is great just how it is!
wonderful. this is - no, I'll just leave it there. no comment except wonderful all the same.
Thank you so much! This was actually my Christmas present for my friend group and I'm so glad they all, and you, like it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! This means so much to me <3
There's a gentleness and sensitivity to this piece that give me tender feels. Somehow, you've made crying tragically beautiful. This poem feels like an expression of pure love and acceptance.