Thank you both; i'm overwhelmed with the amount of love and support I've received from this poem. I'm sending good vibes to everyone who comes across this; it will be okay <3
I still use a variation of my high school ID card number as a password to this day (I'm 31)! Interesting to think about the ways in which we develop attachments and add meaning to such inconsequential things sometimes.
I feel it too. The despair. I appreciate your last two lines, your determination to come together with others and still try to make a difference. And I hope you do let yourself cry if that's what you need to do; it can be so cathartic.
Thank you! I hope you are able to get back home and see the sunset soon!
cool!!!!! the only thing that matters is you're happy with your poems and you seem to be so keep writing :D
Thank you both; i'm overwhelmed with the amount of love and support I've received from this poem. I'm sending good vibes to everyone who comes across this; it will be okay <3
beautiful.
I still use a variation of my high school ID card number as a password to this day (I'm 31)! Interesting to think about the ways in which we develop attachments and add meaning to such inconsequential things sometimes.
Almost like a vortex into another world, and he's disappearing behind it! The distortion of the background adds to the overall effect of the piece.
The shadow-play on your ceiling is so geometric and cool! I wonder if you would see a subtler version if you turned on the light.
I feel it too. The despair. I appreciate your last two lines, your determination to come together with others and still try to make a difference. And I hope you do let yourself cry if that's what you need to do; it can be so cathartic.
This is really good
It is rare to find such poetry sometimes-- each line more impactful than before