"Time Slip" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section! Everyone can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
Ok, I just had this idea. It’s sort of inspired by the Ethicist column in the New York Times, but what if I ran like an advice column and you guys could message me problems (real or made up) and I would pick one every week and write a solution. It could be serious or funny, whatever the people who picked the problem wanted.
"Time Slip" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section! Everyone can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
For an assignment at my school, I need some feedback about this poem. So, reply below for any revision ideas to how to make this better! :3
Thank you! :)
You did really well, it's a very compelling read!
People say “just do what you like” but that involves binge watching and a bunch of junk food so that’s not gonna help anything :/
I feel the same way about food companies honestly. They don’t care about your health, they just want your money
Oooooooo that sounds awesome, I’m in!
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Ok, I just had this idea. It’s sort of inspired by the Ethicist column in the New York Times, but what if I ran like an advice column and you guys could message me problems (real or made up) and I would pick one every week and write a solution. It could be serious or funny, whatever the people who picked the problem wanted.
I couldn’t stay up. I need my sleep! 😂