Thank you both; i'm overwhelmed with the amount of love and support I've received from this poem. I'm sending good vibes to everyone who comes across this; it will be okay <3
I still use a variation of my high school ID card number as a password to this day (I'm 31)! Interesting to think about the ways in which we develop attachments and add meaning to such inconsequential things sometimes.
I feel it too. The despair. I appreciate your last two lines, your determination to come together with others and still try to make a difference. And I hope you do let yourself cry if that's what you need to do; it can be so cathartic.
cool!!!!! the only thing that matters is you're happy with your poems and you seem to be so keep writing :D
Thank you both; i'm overwhelmed with the amount of love and support I've received from this poem. I'm sending good vibes to everyone who comes across this; it will be okay <3
beautiful.
I still use a variation of my high school ID card number as a password to this day (I'm 31)! Interesting to think about the ways in which we develop attachments and add meaning to such inconsequential things sometimes.
Almost like a vortex into another world, and he's disappearing behind it! The distortion of the background adds to the overall effect of the piece.
The shadow-play on your ceiling is so geometric and cool! I wonder if you would see a subtler version if you turned on the light.
I feel it too. The despair. I appreciate your last two lines, your determination to come together with others and still try to make a difference. And I hope you do let yourself cry if that's what you need to do; it can be so cathartic.
This is really good
It is rare to find such poetry sometimes-- each line more impactful than before
This story is inspierd by the photo Revenge of the Goldfish by Sandy Skoglund.