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cool!!!!! the only thing that matters is you're happy with your poems and you seem to be so keep writing :D

Tiny Write by Amerah, November 15 2024 10 months ago

Thank you both; i'm overwhelmed with the amount of love and support I've received from this poem. I'm sending good vibes to everyone who comes across this; it will be okay <3 

Mundane 10 months ago

beautiful. 

Mundane 10 months ago

I still use a variation of my high school ID card number as a password to this day (I'm 31)! Interesting to think about the ways in which we develop attachments and add meaning to such inconsequential things sometimes.

018751 10 months ago

Almost like a vortex into another world, and he's disappearing behind it! The distortion of the background adds to the overall effect of the piece.

Shielded 10 months ago

The shadow-play on your ceiling is so geometric and cool! I wonder if you would see a subtler version if you turned on the light.

Darkness and Light 10 months ago

I feel it too. The despair. I appreciate your last two lines, your determination to come together with others and still try to make a difference. And I hope you do let yourself cry if that's what you need to do; it can be so cathartic.

Mundane 10 months ago

This is really good

Who am I? 10 months ago

It is rare to find such poetry sometimes-- each line more impactful than before

Drill It Out 10 months ago

This story  is inspierd by the photo Revenge of the Goldfish by Sandy Skoglund.

The Goldfish 10 months ago