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I love this! I like the fourth stanza in particular. :)

Caught in a storm 11 months ago

:)

Book Club post by QueenBee, October 9 2024 11 months ago

Happy birthday to my father, who's always been there for me. Love you always.

The Wolf On My Porch 11 months ago

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Crown of Flames 11 months ago

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The Song-Stoked Fire 11 months ago

Yes, basically each line. :)

Second, third, and hundreth chances 11 months ago

Very funny and surprisingly profound!

Short story - Behind the Sofa 11 months ago

Hi! A magic system revolving animals sounds so cool. If you're going for like a based around gods system, I suggest animal gods or if you're drawing on just magic, maybe the animals could help harness abilities or give magic users their abilities? Almost like a witch's familiar lol. I hope this helped and you don't have to take any of my ideas if they're bad lol, good luck writing!

Tiny Write by GhostSlayer, November 29 2024 11 months ago

It might just be my Swiftie brain working overtime, but do I see some Taylor references? (Specifically exile, Champagne Problems, and possibly Maroon?) 

Second, third, and hundreth chances 11 months ago

This is beautiful, wph! Welcome to YWP!

The Night Beach 11 months ago