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Thank you!

Drive 1 year ago

This poem is so hauntingly beautiful! I love the way you described the amber, capturing a feeling of autumn in such a creative way! 

Ember 1 year ago

The imagery in this poem is fantastic! You captured the feeling of fall in such beautiful way. Good job!

Drive 1 year ago

Thank you so much!! And actually, I have been thinking of writing more prose work, so happy you liked my first venture!!

The Fleeting Moment on the Bus During Which I Spied a Dead Thing and a Raven 1 year ago

Yup! Best of luck!

Tiny Write by J_Kramer, September 1 2024 1 year ago

I don't know but it scares me.

Tiny Write by IceGalaxy, September 4 2024 1 year ago

I love this!

Illuminated 1 year ago

This is a poem about starting high school, told in the perspective of a young bird learning to fly. Throughout my high school, I too will learn to fly, and one day I will soar.
But this new chapter of my life, this leaving of the nest, is frightening.

Fearful Flight 1 year ago

I can see why you were inspired by this tree, despite its lack of fruit! The branches are so knobby that they produce the most intricate tangle of shadow, don't they?

Old Apple Tree 1 year ago

Woah, the shade of these poppies (or whatever they are) is stunning against the sunset backdrop. The colors mingle gorgeously.

Sunset flowers 1 year ago