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The fog has turned the brilliance of the sunrise into such fuzzy pastels... I would never have guessed that fog could transform a landscape like this into a new, serene beauty all its own. In fact, I'd really never thought about fog being beautiful until I came across this photo!

Standing 11 months ago

You have a way with words! I enjoyed following your speaker's train of thoughts, all the casual but thought-provoking observations they made. The end surprised and saddened me and made me want to give your character a hug. I remember feeling the same way when I was younger. I hope they come to find their purpose in life -- a life that surely does still want them around!

Small Towns at Sunset 11 months ago

You nailed the atmosphere of a small town carnival: the sights, the smells, the sounds. I can picture it so clearly!

Summer carnival 11 months ago

You're welcome

I Walked To School Today 11 months ago

That's nice to know, thank you!

Tiny Write by twoblueviolets, October 9 2024 11 months ago

Thanks :)

I Walked To School Today 11 months ago

This means that you write with feel. And if you like to write like that you should keep writing in that way.

Tiny Write by twoblueviolets, October 9 2024 11 months ago

It would have been cool, although I know from experience that it kind of sucks when it actually happens. Hope the water goes down :) 

I Walked To School Today 11 months ago

Thank you!!

The Unlikeliest Duo 11 months ago

Thanks so much for the comment! I appreciate any opinions or criticisms, it helps me become a better writer. 

The Blackbird 11 months ago