This is both whimsical and eerie. Perfect for a little children's poem, haha! Your use of folksy/antiquated language ("hornéd," "a-") really add to the effect.
This is really good! Even though I don't feel like I'm fully a part of anything a lot of the time and community/inclusion feels like a dream to me, I can really feel the warmth coming from all the descriptions :)
I hope one day at least home will feel like that. It's a bit hard when you're in a family of five and everyone's always loud and dramatic (expect Dad, Dad's chill. But everyone else? Oh boy.)
Absolutely incredible. And he was dehydrated and starving because he hadn't drank or eaten anything for days. He exceeded the record for holding the senate floor, which, coincidentally, was set in favor of the Civil Rights Act of 1957 with 24 hours and 18 minutes. 46 minutes past the record, absolutely amazing. I hope he's taking the longest nap of his life and eating the best food ever. (edited for clarification sorry lol)
This is both whimsical and eerie. Perfect for a little children's poem, haha! Your use of folksy/antiquated language ("hornéd," "a-") really add to the effect.
I really enjoyed reading this it’s pretty good!
This is really good! Even though I don't feel like I'm fully a part of anything a lot of the time and community/inclusion feels like a dream to me, I can really feel the warmth coming from all the descriptions :)
I hope one day at least home will feel like that. It's a bit hard when you're in a family of five and everyone's always loud and dramatic (expect Dad, Dad's chill. But everyone else? Oh boy.)
Thank you!
Absolutely incredible. And he was dehydrated and starving because he hadn't drank or eaten anything for days. He exceeded the record for holding the senate floor, which, coincidentally, was set in favor of the Civil Rights Act of 1957 with 24 hours and 18 minutes. 46 minutes past the record, absolutely amazing. I hope he's taking the longest nap of his life and eating the best food ever. (edited for clarification sorry lol)
I love this poem so, so much, and I think of it every time I paint my nails. Everything in it is so beautiful and thoughtful!
i agree
<3
awe I adore that
This looks almost painted. It's cool.