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I really liked this poem. It expresses the intangible nature of dreams in such an ethereal way. It reminded me of some of my own dreams and brought forth images that I forgot until they all came crashing back.  

Dreaming 1 year ago

thanks for the recommendation!! :)

Tiny Write by mmae_ee, December 5 2024 1 year ago

I love this! The rhythm is so captivating. :)

Online 1 year ago

Such a beautiful poem. :)

A Palmful of Metaphors 1 year ago

I love the rhymes and structure so much! Such a good poem. :)

A Silent Song 1 year ago

Short but powerful! :)

Survivor 1 year ago

This is soooo good! I love this poem. :)

I Didn't Know It Then 1 year ago

I love books where the character goes on a quest. I feel like those plot lines are always pretty successful and easy to plan. It's relatively simple, too so you can add a lot of your own spin.

Tiny Write by mmae_ee, December 5 2024 1 year ago

Okay! Thanks for the tip, I'll check it out!

Tiny Write by Sawyer Fell, December 4 2024 1 year ago

Love this one! It's so powerful and creative. I really felt connected to the storyline you told through poetry. Beautiful and authentic. Great job!

I Didn't Know It Then 1 year ago