This is simply beautiful. Your voice in this piece is so beautiful and strong "The bulb of sun is a haven of ideas / Each glowing particle is a prompt, / A beginning or an end, / An arch or a dip" is such a fantastic line I adore it. Keep writing!
Same to you! I've also made friends accidentally haha, the amount of times a random compliment or a joke in the lunch line turned into a friendship is crazy. Here's to a great school year!
I love the rhymes, it has such great flow!
"creating the orchestra of fall" what an awesome line. Lovely poem :)
I am READY for spooky season
I really see someone reading this with this epic How to Train Your Dragon music in the background. It's an epic poem
This is simply beautiful. Your voice in this piece is so beautiful and strong "The bulb of sun is a haven of ideas / Each glowing particle is a prompt, / A beginning or an end, / An arch or a dip" is such a fantastic line I adore it. Keep writing!
OMG ROME!! That's SO cool I know you'll have a fantastic time!
Same to you! I've also made friends accidentally haha, the amount of times a random compliment or a joke in the lunch line turned into a friendship is crazy. Here's to a great school year!
literally crying. childhood is so special.
Of course!
thank you <3