I really love this! I love the line "One scroll, one like, and suddenly everything else we’ve done disappears in their eyes". It's so true. I also like when you said "And one day, they'll realize it" because it made me sort of realize that this is our version of when parents say "you'll thank me one day" or other things along the lines of that. We hope that one day our parents will just understand that hard work comes with rest and taking care of yourself. So cool to see another person from MD!
I really love this! I love the line "One scroll, one like, and suddenly everything else we’ve done disappears in their eyes". It's so true. I also like when you said "And one day, they'll realize it" because it made me sort of realize that this our version of when parents say "you'll thank me one day" or other things along the lines of that. We hope that one day our parents will just understand that hard work comes with rest and taking care of yourself. So cool to see another person from MD too!
Same!! I feel like some longer poems start to feel repetitive but some shorter poems are too quick. I agree that it depends on the poem and what it’s about
thank you so much!!! i'm going to do 3 more so there's one for each of the 4 winds haha so hopefully i can channel the same energy to write the next ones!
I really love this! I love the line "One scroll, one like, and suddenly everything else we’ve done disappears in their eyes". It's so true. I also like when you said "And one day, they'll realize it" because it made me sort of realize that this is our version of when parents say "you'll thank me one day" or other things along the lines of that. We hope that one day our parents will just understand that hard work comes with rest and taking care of yourself. So cool to see another person from MD!
I really love this! I love the line "One scroll, one like, and suddenly everything else we’ve done disappears in their eyes". It's so true. I also like when you said "And one day, they'll realize it" because it made me sort of realize that this our version of when parents say "you'll thank me one day" or other things along the lines of that. We hope that one day our parents will just understand that hard work comes with rest and taking care of yourself. So cool to see another person from MD too!
This is so great. I love your descriptions of people.
Thank you!!
Same!! I feel like some longer poems start to feel repetitive but some shorter poems are too quick. I agree that it depends on the poem and what it’s about
This is amazing! Keep writing! :)
thank you!!
I love this kind of description! Beautiful writing
thank you so much!!! i'm going to do 3 more so there's one for each of the 4 winds haha so hopefully i can channel the same energy to write the next ones!
Both! For me, it really depends on what it's about.