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Thank you!!

!!! 2 months ago

thank you so much! I wrote this without knowing where it was going, so I'm glad someone liked it!!!

you have the right to remain silent 2 months ago

The contrast between gold and lavender (white?) is delicious! Lovely shot.

!!! 2 months ago

This is so sweet (without being gooey)! I like that you make reference to familial and platonic love; it enhances what you're trying to communicate about romantic love. I wish you and your partner well!

This Kind of Love 2 months ago

Oh gosh, whereabouts were you driving through? I'm glad you made it home safe!

Vermont flooding 2 months ago

I think I'm with you, I think I'd choose to be a fox as well! Such sly and mysterious creatures... When I picture them, it's dancing in the moonlight, too. "Wild life" vs. "wildlife" is a clever distinction. 

To Be the Fox 2 months ago

Heart-warming and sweet. I only hope she knows your graciousness; if not, it is known in this poem. Great job :)

For Mom 2 months ago

Thank you so much, Anna!! I'm glad you noticed the loop :)

With My Mother in My Chest. My Chest 2 months ago

UGH, this is so gut-wrenchingly good. The shortness of the poem keeps from how beautifully you worded your thoughts. This perfectly describes how I also connect to nature and almost gives notes of childhood wonder (at least that's what I gained.) The fourth stanza is my favorite; even in the dying leaves, there is sweetness. Wonderful job!

Autumn Forest Goddess 2 months ago

What a great shot! Love the reflection on the car hood --- gives the whole thing a dream like quality! 

Autumn driving 2 months ago