Fabulous. And that first line is such a banger. Not that I think this should to be included in the poem, but I'm desperately curious... Are the aliens incapable of helping us climb over the walls we've built? Do they not want to help us? Or do they think it's something we need to do on our own?
This is a very enticing and succinct story! It reminds me of the way Anthony Doerr writes. Check him out- Maybe you'll be inspired to expand the story :)
This packs a serious punch. Wow. I'm impressed by how you've managed encrypt a primordial existential howl into such a succinct crisp little piece!
Fabulous. And that first line is such a banger. Not that I think this should to be included in the poem, but I'm desperately curious... Are the aliens incapable of helping us climb over the walls we've built? Do they not want to help us? Or do they think it's something we need to do on our own?
Thanks for the suggestion!
This is a very enticing and succinct story! It reminds me of the way Anthony Doerr writes. Check him out- Maybe you'll be inspired to expand the story :)
I’ve been thinking this for a while! I would love an app
Brilliant, IceGalaxy!
ooooh this sounds like a fairy tale!! dark & ivy-choked, just the way it should be :D
Thank you 💜
And thank you for reading it!!
Good idea
Thank you so much!:))