this whole thing is amazing especially this paragraph, We are iron dressed in cotton, we are strength made of empathy, power made of care, we are the ones who stand back up after being pushed down again and again. We are the mothers of revolution and the daughters of silence.
Nice work on this. I think it totally captures a deep emotion that women feel really often. It's important to get this problem addressed. Because its really not okay. But anyway, this is really good.
This is incredible, I love it so much! It feels so close to your heart, and I felt like it brought me closer to mine. My sister leaves for college soon, and this was such a wonderful thing to read :)
Think about how your poetry makes you feel when you read it. Try to convey your emotions through your voice. Most of all, make sure you’re having fun with it. This is for you, so it should be about your feelings and thoughts and experiences.
this whole thing is amazing especially this paragraph,
We are iron dressed in cotton, we are strength made of empathy, power made of care, we are the ones who stand back up after being pushed down again and again. We are the mothers of revolution and the daughters of silence.
Nice work on this. I think it totally captures a deep emotion that women feel really often. It's important to get this problem addressed. Because its really not okay. But anyway, this is really good.
Thanks!!
this is amazing!
This is incredible, I love it so much! It feels so close to your heart, and I felt like it brought me closer to mine. My sister leaves for college soon, and this was such a wonderful thing to read :)
Tell him!
Thanks!
thank u so much!!!!
Me too!!
Oh my goodness, congrats!!
Think about how your poetry makes you feel when you read it. Try to convey your emotions through your voice. Most of all, make sure you’re having fun with it. This is for you, so it should be about your feelings and thoughts and experiences.
You’re gonna do great! Have confidence!
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