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Is this from a character pov? Or is this about M? Either way, it's a very beautiful piece

What's wrong with me? 2 months ago

You should truly go for her, if this is about M, she'll be lucky to have you 

now her 2 months ago

This made me laugh! So cute! Yes, you should photograph your entire collection.

Stone Owl 2 months ago

Wise words. That you've come to the realization that, no, you never DO wake up one day having it all figured out, is a well-earned prize, even if it feels like anything but -- it's the first step on the road to acceptance of ourselves and our imperfections, and gratitude for what we have, where we've been, how far we've come. A beautiful reflection. Happy birthday, there's so much ahead of you!

Birthday #2 2 months ago

This is so tender and sweet! Having someone to care for is truly one of the joys of life.

I promise 2 months ago

The circular quality of this piece serves only to strengthen it. Each of your words feels carefully chosen and crafted, with a great measure of intention behind them. 

With My Mother in My Chest. My Chest 2 months ago
  1. ELA is the best class by far
  2. Spanish because the teacher can't manage the classroom 
  3. Maybe getting to work in the State House as a Page
  4. 8th grade, but I'm mostly homeschooled so it doesn't matter
  5. The food at my school sucks, but I'm in an under privileged part of VT so it's good that we have it at all because some of the kids only eat school food
  6. I'm on the Vermont State Youth Council  
Tiny Write by Fainting Goat, September 6 2024 2 months ago

I love this poem so much! It was recently my birthday, and I was feeling really nostalgic about growing up. I couldn't stop thinking about the future and how it would turn out. But you really put my feelings into words. It just means we should cherish the time we have now. Happy Birthday! :) 

Birthday #2 2 months ago

This is wonderfully said; the imagery is fitting, and the language suits this poem very well!

you have the right to remain silent 2 months ago
  1. A year long singing class with 11th and 12th graders. 
  2. AP Statistics. There are so many new concepts I have to learn and the homework takes a long time. 
  3. Still # 1 
  4. 12th grade 
  5. Our school lunch is ok. Some days are better than others. 
  6. I'm in Model UN and in January we go on a trip to Philly so I'm excited for that. 
Tiny Write by Fainting Goat, September 6 2024 2 months ago