As a Canadian from Quebec....Thank you Abigail. We know that a lot of Americans are not in agreement with your country's leaders and we appreciate the support. Don't feel sorry, it's not your fault. The only people we blame are the US leaders who are spearheading this movement of hatred and division. Keep up the great work :)
I think alliteration is one of the most underrated literary devices (and one with a long long history in English literature) and this makes fabulous use of it! I particularly love "submissive soul-soiled" Soul-soiled! (an alliterative compound!) "Vilified verefied" and "inbred intellectual injustice" are also awesome.
I love this so much!!! I can feel space and time contracting and expanding and its wonderful! I also love the switch to the second person in the last stanza. My introducing a witness you make your "universe" feel more real.
As a Canadian from Quebec....Thank you Abigail. We know that a lot of Americans are not in agreement with your country's leaders and we appreciate the support. Don't feel sorry, it's not your fault. The only people we blame are the US leaders who are spearheading this movement of hatred and division. Keep up the great work :)
awesome!! hope this helps!
Congratulations, that’s so awesome!! I’m so excited to check it out!
I think alliteration is one of the most underrated literary devices (and one with a long long history in English literature) and this makes fabulous use of it! I particularly love "submissive soul-soiled" Soul-soiled! (an alliterative compound!) "Vilified verefied" and "inbred intellectual injustice" are also awesome.
"I fear death
The way I fear the end of a song" what an incredible first line! Hits really hard
I love this so much!!! I can feel space and time contracting and expanding and its wonderful! I also love the switch to the second person in the last stanza. My introducing a witness you make your "universe" feel more real.
of course! Music is really fun but it burns people out so quickly lol
Same!! It's so, so pretty
thanks so much!
Ooooh okay, thank you so much! I will definitely be trying these!