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Omg I love this poem so much! All the rhymes are so flawless and really add such an amazing rhythmic quality to your poem. "And I hold myself up to the light like a swatch / Contrasting the pigments until I look botched" Utterly amazing! Your descriptions and your narrative are so nicely woven together, I also love the message of the poem and where it all ends. Great work! :)

Daybreak 3 months ago

this is rlly good love the powerful usage of line breaks

Sparkler 3 months ago

oh hello! i'm sorry, i didn't see this until just now, somehow. i'm rather late but yes i will check it out!

nameless II 3 months ago

Tyy! Yours is cool too (ignoring the fact I had to search up what it is)

Wanted 3 months ago

huh, I wonder why? my entire school district has every ai website blocked on our computers, including stuff like random word generators and things like that

Tiny Write by nimbostratus, July 2 2025 3 months ago

Ooh thank you! Will definitely check out!

Book Club post by nimbostratus, June 30 2025 3 months ago

Ooh that sounds cool! Thank you for the recommendation!

Book Club post by nimbostratus, June 30 2025 3 months ago

This is amazing!!  I really liked the way you developed the ideas, it made it really fun to read.  Beautiful work!

I made tea 3 months ago

Another book I think might work is Time Bomb by Joelle Charbonneau. It is a thriller-type book with a bit of mystery. The main plot is basically a bunch of people trying to get out of a high school after/during a bombing, but it also has some very well written lessons and some great character arcs! (Also it’s told from six perspectives!!)

Book Club post by nimbostratus, June 30 2025 3 months ago

Ace of Spades is another dark mystery set in a high school. It's very surprising and thought provoking. 

Book Club post by nimbostratus, June 30 2025 3 months ago