You are bravely writing such important questions and said it best "why do we fear knowledge? / why don't we try to know anymore?" This gave me goosebumps. A great response to this prompt and an even better standalone piece. Keep writing
Siyona.S.stay said it best your writing is layered and embodies deeper emotional elements wrapped in storytelling and visuals. The squeezing heart, the coiled hair and the air of masked carelessness trickled into a beautiful and heart-squeezing ending. We've all at some point felt this way I believe, and it is relatable and I love the line breaks. Incredible work. Keep writing
"Who reads books like she’s starving and the words are big, juicy cheeseburgers" is my favorite line. I wish I could mountain bike. Lovely piece, and I love the ending. Keep writing!
thanks!!
This is amazing!!!
Thanks!
Thank you!!!!
this is so good!!!!!
Thank you so much, this means a lot to hear!
You are bravely writing such important questions and said it best "why do we fear knowledge? / why don't we try to know anymore?" This gave me goosebumps. A great response to this prompt and an even better standalone piece. Keep writing
That last stanza is gorgeous and powerful. Glad I got to read this
Siyona.S.stay said it best your writing is layered and embodies deeper emotional elements wrapped in storytelling and visuals. The squeezing heart, the coiled hair and the air of masked carelessness trickled into a beautiful and heart-squeezing ending. We've all at some point felt this way I believe, and it is relatable and I love the line breaks. Incredible work. Keep writing
"Who reads books like she’s starving and the words are big, juicy cheeseburgers" is my favorite line. I wish I could mountain bike. Lovely piece, and I love the ending. Keep writing!