Ahhhh you did such a great job describing that post christmas funk! "The minuet hand trembles then moves in wistful wirls" whata perfect image for the new year ! Always love your writing, Geri!
I think that I Wish You All The Best, by Mason Deaver is really good. It follows an 18 year old kid named Ben, who gets kicked out of his parent's house after coming out as nonbinary.
This poem is beautiful! I love the reputation of fog and the rhyme structure at the end of the first section. This poem tells a story through imagery and it calms the heart to read!
I love Sally Rooney! I am currently re-reading Beautiful World, Where Are You? I just love her style and the way she intellectualizes and conceptualizes human relationships between others and the world.
Ahhhh you did such a great job describing that post christmas funk! "The minuet hand trembles then moves in wistful wirls" whata perfect image for the new year ! Always love your writing, Geri!
Beautiful poem! love the repetition. I also love the image of fog as I serves as both an active character in the poem and a simile.
This poem is amazing. It's so well written, and I really related to it. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Remember that it's okay not to know who you are. It takes years to figure that out. Who you are as a person changes, and that's okay.
Mine's probably horror.
I think that I Wish You All The Best, by Mason Deaver is really good. It follows an 18 year old kid named Ben, who gets kicked out of his parent's house after coming out as nonbinary.
This is absolutely genious from that first line I was sucked in! What a first sentence: Absurd, surprising, endlessly poetic...
I love all the specific imagery you have here!
This poem is beautiful! I love the reputation of fog and the rhyme structure at the end of the first section. This poem tells a story through imagery and it calms the heart to read!
This is really well done! You so clearly play with the intangible and create really lovely metaphors and pressurized connections.
I love Sally Rooney! I am currently re-reading Beautiful World, Where Are You? I just love her style and the way she intellectualizes and conceptualizes human relationships between others and the world.