Cold, bitten, waiting at the door
Rain like the universe’s tears streaming down his cheeks
He knows rejection—it's known him from the start
You see, forgiveness is his revenge on himself
Mountains like monuments waiting
But his door is shut, locked, and bolted.
He thought he knew a friend
But it was really his own fear
Oh, it swells up inside and works its way out
Ever outward, never escaping.
His anger is his confinement.
The chains he can’t break on his own
Wrap around his soul, and others
Oh, the people watch scornfully
Shivering, the only warmth is his breath
The only heart still burning is his soul
But he is a fire burning cold, snuffed with beach sand
Deprived of control
Bitten by emotion, scarred by happiness
A lock without a key.
Comments
This is very lyrically strong, and I really suggest you look up the poem "She Got, He Got" by Jayne Cortez and watch the video of her performance!! I think this poem, if you wish to experiment more, would be really cool as a villanelle! The line "You see, forgiveness is his revenge on himself" struck me the most. I'm excited to see more of this and others from you!!
Gives a really good visual <3
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