Would we be a disappointment

George Washington

Alexander Hamilton

Thomas Jefferson

John Jay

John Adams

James Madison

And more

We have monuments

To honor these people

A musical for one

A statue for another

We honor them in materialistic ways

They fought for us

George Washington leading

Alexander Hamilton

His right hand man

James Madison and John Jay

Wrote the federalist papers

Alongside Alexander Hamilton

Thomas Jefferson

Wrote the Declaration of Independence

With James Madison

John Adams

The second president

They built our country

They painted every stroke

Hoping one day

We would finish

Their painting

And make it a masterpiece

They had dreams

They had ideas

They started America

All we had to do was make it better

Did we?

Did we add the details

To the great unfinished painting

Or did we scribble over

Their hard work

Everyones hard work

How would they look at us

We made progress

There are no slaves

Women can vote

It is better

But is it enough?

There is still

Racism

And sexism

These things were here

Years ago

Right alongside the founding fathers

Would we be a disappointment?

George Washington

Alexander Hamilton

Thomas Jefferson

John Jay

John Adams

James Madison

And more

Posted in response to the challenge Founders.

Gali

VT

13 years old

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