ur too nice❤️❤️ actually i read your poem 'sun drunk cherry stained' and that's what got me thinking about the myth. i really liked your prose and emotion especially! i didn't know you were the guy who wrote that poem either haha
I know! And is just the best word to start on! also, looking at your poems, I find it interesting reading your dealdeus (I cannot spell ;-;) poem and contrasting it with my Icarus poem (And other icarus poems) bc aaaaaa I like your take on that (actually, I love all of your poems. I clicked on a few earlier and then I clicked on your profile and was plesantly surprised bc I didn't know that It was the same person that wrote the dealdeus poem
Thanks very much! It's funny - I often find writing long pieces a struggle, because my brain just wants to condense everything into as tiny a paragraph as possible.
I clicked on this, expecting a longer poem, but it is short and I can still see the meaning in it and that amazes me. All my poetry tends to ramble, and I over explain and I never know where to end it. You don't and that is part of why I feel so drawn to your poetry. You are quite lovely. keep writing! <3
OMG I'm literally sobbing this is beautiful.
ur too nice❤️❤️
actually i read your poem 'sun drunk cherry stained' and that's what got me thinking about the myth. i really liked your prose and emotion especially! i didn't know you were the guy who wrote that poem either haha
I know! And is just the best word to start on! also, looking at your poems, I find it interesting reading your dealdeus (I cannot spell ;-;) poem and contrasting it with my Icarus poem (And other icarus poems) bc aaaaaa I like your take on that (actually, I love all of your poems. I clicked on a few earlier and then I clicked on your profile and was plesantly surprised bc I didn't know that It was the same person that wrote the dealdeus poem
congratulations!
YESSSS i thought i was the only one!! "And" for me feels inevitable and i genuinely have to resist using it in every poem too!!!
omg inheritance games are peak🔥🔥
Thanks very much! It's funny - I often find writing long pieces a struggle, because my brain just wants to condense everything into as tiny a paragraph as possible.
I can relate to this a lot, how the characters are always so perfect, sometimes it makes you ask why you can’t be like that.
Also - This is a very well written piece! You’re very talented! :)
I clicked on this, expecting a longer poem, but it is short and I can still see the meaning in it and that amazes me. All my poetry tends to ramble, and I over explain and I never know where to end it. You don't and that is part of why I feel so drawn to your poetry. You are quite lovely. keep writing! <3
Thanks!