Holly crap, this is fantastic. I love the last line, it is perfect. I love the style you have at the beginning where it feels almost detached, but in a good, dystopian way, and then how it gets more and more scary (at least form my reading point of view) the more you read. You should be really proud of this.
Thank you. I'm a little bit obsessed with Little Women at the moment and I just keep thinking about what life would be like for the girls if they lived today.
would you believe me if i said it took me 10 days of reading this back to myself to understand what you meant and how good it is? because it did i've literally been staring at this for over a week ;)
whoa. this is, like, dark in all the right ways and makes my head hurt with power and my heart hurt with the reality of it. this could totally be a twilight zone episode or be published in a sci fi magazine, terrific job.
Holly crap, this is fantastic. I love the last line, it is perfect. I love the style you have at the beginning where it feels almost detached, but in a good, dystopian way, and then how it gets more and more scary (at least form my reading point of view) the more you read. You should be really proud of this.
totally!
Jo is by far my favorite March sister, so I love this!
Thank you. I'm a little bit obsessed with Little Women at the moment and I just keep thinking about what life would be like for the girls if they lived today.
This is really, really good. Wow. I especially love the formatting and word choice. Great job!!!
Having read Little Women, this resonates with me so much!
Thank you so much! It's definitely a more cryptic one, but I think anyone who's ever been fed up with a can get it eventually.
Wow. Wooooow. Incredible
would you believe me if i said it took me 10 days of reading this back to myself to understand what you meant and how good it is? because it did i've literally been staring at this for over a week ;)
whoa. this is, like, dark in all the right ways and makes my head hurt with power and my heart hurt with the reality of it. this could totally be a twilight zone episode or be published in a sci fi magazine, terrific job.