That does help a little, thank you! I’m lucky enough to have someone my age in this course who will tell me if something is written well and what needs to be worked on.
That can be so hard, when nobody is giving you constructive feedback so you know how to improve! Something that helps me is to get peer-reviews. Find someone your own age who also likes to write (could be someone in your class or outside it), and ask them to review your writing; be sure to tell them to give both positive feedback, and constructive criticism. If you don't agree with what they say, find a different person.
so the poets of the future could trace the black wires with their fingertips and stare longingly as the endless lines rolled away out the car windows, wondering why they were put there in the first place.
(late answer sorry but i think about this post a lot haha)
This is written beautifully!
wooooowwwwwwww i love this so much.
i wish!! meanwhile i'm over here doing my homework at my desk & it's already dark outside
That does help a little, thank you! I’m lucky enough to have someone my age in this course who will tell me if something is written well and what needs to be worked on.
That can be so hard, when nobody is giving you constructive feedback so you know how to improve! Something that helps me is to get peer-reviews. Find someone your own age who also likes to write (could be someone in your class or outside it), and ask them to review your writing; be sure to tell them to give both positive feedback, and constructive criticism. If you don't agree with what they say, find a different person.
I hope this helps!
Thank You!
so the poets of the future could trace the black wires with their fingertips and stare longingly as the endless lines rolled away out the car windows, wondering why they were put there in the first place.
(late answer sorry but i think about this post a lot haha)
This may be true, but I feel like adjectives allow more beauty and detail in writing. I think they contribute to the art
even if we abolished adjectives, though, big vocabulary might just turn to adverbs
meant to say sorry, not you heard me.