“To grow older is to forget the vines creeping up your wall, / To only see that they have grown too tall.” Is such a beautiful line and this whole piece is so exquisite. You describe the passing of time so well. It’s a good reminder we should still look at the birds and flowers and slow down and breath. Amazing piece. Keep writing!
What a lovely short story. Your writing flows so well and I was invested from beginning to end. Love the message. “Enough so I can breath again” is my favorite line, I can feel that from the main character. Glad I was lucky enough to read this. Keep writing!
This may be true, but I feel like adjectives allow more beauty and detail in writing. I think they contribute to the art
even if we abolished adjectives, though, big vocabulary might just turn to adverbs
meant to say sorry, not you heard me.
Christ, dude, I'm so you heard me.that happened. Really scary stuff I hope you're okay.
If nobody remembers something, a tree falls in the forest.
Thank you!!
I hope sharing this helps you be you.
It’s brave to share what’s in your heart and head, if not hard. Wonderful piece. Keep writing!
“To grow older is to forget the vines creeping up your wall, / To only see that they have grown too tall.” Is such a beautiful line and this whole piece is so exquisite. You describe the passing of time so well. It’s a good reminder we should still look at the birds and flowers and slow down and breath. Amazing piece. Keep writing!
What a lovely short story. Your writing flows so well and I was invested from beginning to end. Love the message. “Enough so I can breath again” is my favorite line, I can feel that from the main character. Glad I was lucky enough to read this. Keep writing!