I really can't find anything to critique your use of repetition, figurative language, and punctuation delivers a gut punch to the soul. Not only that, but your willingness to ask for critique shows clear maturity and willingness to improve (of course, not wanting critique doesn't make you immature but wanting it is a postive nontheless).
i read that too, a while back! did you know alex haley also wrote the autobiography of malcolm x? you should totally look into that too, if roots hooked you. it has some really insanely interesting perspective and ideas, like roots.
Hello there! I am glad my poem had some form of emotional impact on you, and i was wondering if maybe you could take the time to critique? I am trying to improve my poetry, so if you could let me know which lines were strong, what worked well, ND what interrupted the flow or just didn't add anything, that would be great!! <3
Omg I've had kids at school ask if I've used AI too! It's so irritating that we are taught to write in a specific way and then get punished for it.
Your usage of color is so awesome
I really can't find anything to critique your use of repetition, figurative language, and punctuation delivers a gut punch to the soul. Not only that, but your willingness to ask for critique shows clear maturity and willingness to improve (of course, not wanting critique doesn't make you immature but wanting it is a postive nontheless).
I love this! It made me smile :)
i read that too, a while back! did you know alex haley also wrote the autobiography of malcolm x? you should totally look into that too, if roots hooked you. it has some really insanely interesting perspective and ideas, like roots.
I’m so glad! Thank you!
OMG this is absolutely epic the way you used color blew me away your art tastes like raspberries and vanilla ice cream
Hello there! I am glad my poem had some form of emotional impact on you, and i was wondering if maybe you could take the time to critique? I am trying to improve my poetry, so if you could let me know which lines were strong, what worked well, ND what interrupted the flow or just didn't add anything, that would be great!! <3
Welp I'm crying.
I try I try lol Could definitely be better though