what an exquisite poem. I love the title and the line breaks and the pauses feels like breaths as she dances and the second stanza is my favorite, especially the pause after "shining in the gentle light of the moon" Amazing. Keep writing.
I think this is both a really great photo and poem! I think it's a very valuable exercise for writers to practice writing from images, much the same way a painter makes a still life.
I like to write about the dark side of society, like the things that nobody talks about, but are always there. And I also love to write about random things that come to mind, like if a song is stuck in my head, I'll write about what it makes me think of.
Recently I've been in a really bad writer's block, but things that I don't know much about or are important to me are often common themes in my poetry.
what an exquisite poem. I love the title and the line breaks and the pauses feels like breaths as she dances and the second stanza is my favorite, especially the pause after "shining in the gentle light of the moon" Amazing. Keep writing.
That… makes a TON of sense actually!
I think this is both a really great photo and poem! I think it's a very valuable exercise for writers to practice writing from images, much the same way a painter makes a still life.
Thank you so much!
This is beautiful 😭! I love the ending, the metaphor with the flowers really sealed it up nicely!
aw I love this!! "busy becoming" is such a good line :D
thank you! I really never know how to end my poems so that’s lovely to hear
I love that for you! Dipper and Mable are so funny!
I like to write about the dark side of society, like the things that nobody talks about, but are always there. And I also love to write about random things that come to mind, like if a song is stuck in my head, I'll write about what it makes me think of.
Recently I've been in a really bad writer's block, but things that I don't know much about or are important to me are often common themes in my poetry.