I had a substitute teacher give me a zero on an assignments in 7th grade because she said that there was absolutely no way that a 7th grader could've written it! I was devastated until the regular teacher came back and gave me full points.
I really can't find anything to critique your use of repetition, figurative language, and punctuation delivers a gut punch to the soul. Not only that, but your willingness to ask for critique shows clear maturity and willingness to improve (of course, not wanting critique doesn't make you immature but wanting it is a postive nontheless).
holy!!! this is wonderful
BEST COMPLIMENT THANK YOU TWIN <3
I want this poem injected into my veins
All the time and then it feels like I wasn't actually the one to write it which makes me feel even worse
nope its perfect
I had a substitute teacher give me a zero on an assignments in 7th grade because she said that there was absolutely no way that a 7th grader could've written it! I was devastated until the regular teacher came back and gave me full points.
Omg I've had kids at school ask if I've used AI too! It's so irritating that we are taught to write in a specific way and then get punished for it.
Your usage of color is so awesome
I really can't find anything to critique your use of repetition, figurative language, and punctuation delivers a gut punch to the soul. Not only that, but your willingness to ask for critique shows clear maturity and willingness to improve (of course, not wanting critique doesn't make you immature but wanting it is a postive nontheless).
I love this! It made me smile :)