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what an exquisite poem. I love the title and the line breaks and the pauses feels like breaths as she dances and the second stanza is my favorite, especially the pause after "shining in the gentle light of the moon" Amazing. Keep writing.

In My Heart is a Waltzing Girl 1 day ago

That… makes a TON of sense actually! 

The Night’s Eye 2 days ago

I think this is both a really great photo and poem! I think it's a very valuable exercise for writers to practice writing from images, much the same way a painter makes a still life.

The Night’s Eye 2 days ago

Thank you so much! 

Never Be Enough 2 days ago

This is beautiful 😭! I love the ending, the metaphor with the flowers really sealed it up nicely! 

Never Be Enough 2 days ago

aw I love this!! "busy becoming" is such a good line :D

The shape of yesterday 2 days ago

thank you! I really never know how to end my poems so that’s lovely to hear 

just kids 2 days ago

I love that for you! Dipper and Mable are so funny!

Tiny Write by bumblebea, November 1 2025 3 days ago

I like to write about the dark side of society, like the things that nobody talks about, but are always there. And I also love to write about random things that come to mind, like if a song is stuck in my head, I'll write about what it makes me think of.

Tiny Write by raincity, December 2 2025 3 days ago

Recently I've been in a really bad writer's block, but things that I don't know much about or are important to me are often common themes in my poetry.

Tiny Write by raincity, December 2 2025 3 days ago