Well it came out great :D
Haha I did have my little brother helping me and he was wearing gloves so it wasn’t too bad, but my hands were a bit numb for a while after.
Yay! I’m so glad you liked it!! When I read it, I didn't get why they did the dare when they had no reason to. The very end was wild, though. It kind of reminded me of One Of Us Is Next (book two of the One Of Us Is Lying trilogy).
can I wright something like this based on the other person's pov? I'll only write it if you say its okay with you.
What do you do when the walls come down,And you finally drop your heavy crown?
What do you do when the door is wide,And you let the kindness step inside?
What do you do when the fear is gone,And you aren't the only one holding on?
What do you do
when the light breaks through,
and you finally let me walk with you?
Ps. I love your writing :)
What do you do when the shadows part,And I see the crying within your heart?
What do you do when I’m standing near,To catch the fall of every tear?
What do you do when the air is still,And I offer the breath you cannot fill?
when the silence is shared,
and you finally see that someone cared?
The goat has done it again! I lover the way you created a visual effect with your poem's layout
Your hands must have stung so bad after making this lol
Not a single thought behind those eyes
This is soooo good! I love how you use figurative language!
Well it came out great :D
Haha I did have my little brother helping me and he was wearing gloves so it wasn’t too bad, but my hands were a bit numb for a while after.
Yay! I’m so glad you liked it!! When I read it, I didn't get why they did the dare when they had no reason to. The very end was wild, though. It kind of reminded me of One Of Us Is Next (book two of the One Of Us Is Lying trilogy).
can I wright something like this based on the other person's pov? I'll only write it if you say its okay with you.
What do you do when the walls come down,
And you finally drop your heavy crown?
What do you do when the door is wide,
And you let the kindness step inside?
What do you do when the fear is gone,
And you aren't the only one holding on?
What do you do
when the light breaks through,
and you finally let me walk with you?
Ps. I love your writing :)
What do you do when the shadows part,
And I see the crying within your heart?
What do you do when I’m standing near,
To catch the fall of every tear?
What do you do when the air is still,
And I offer the breath you cannot fill?
What do you do
when the silence is shared,
and you finally see that someone cared?
The goat has done it again! I lover the way you created a visual effect with your poem's layout
Your hands must have stung so bad after making this lol
Not a single thought behind those eyes
This is soooo good! I love how you use figurative language!