The fog has turned the brilliance of the sunrise into such fuzzy pastels... I would never have guessed that fog could transform a landscape like this into a new, serene beauty all its own. In fact, I'd really never thought about fog being beautiful until I came across this photo!
You have a way with words! I enjoyed following your speaker's train of thoughts, all the casual but thought-provoking observations they made. The end surprised and saddened me and made me want to give your character a hug. I remember feeling the same way when I was younger. I hope they come to find their purpose in life -- a life that surely does still want them around!
Thank you so much!
Thank you! I’ve really been appreciating the fog these past few mornings!
The fog has turned the brilliance of the sunrise into such fuzzy pastels... I would never have guessed that fog could transform a landscape like this into a new, serene beauty all its own. In fact, I'd really never thought about fog being beautiful until I came across this photo!
You have a way with words! I enjoyed following your speaker's train of thoughts, all the casual but thought-provoking observations they made. The end surprised and saddened me and made me want to give your character a hug. I remember feeling the same way when I was younger. I hope they come to find their purpose in life -- a life that surely does still want them around!
You nailed the atmosphere of a small town carnival: the sights, the smells, the sounds. I can picture it so clearly!
You're welcome
That's nice to know, thank you!
Thanks :)
This means that you write with feel. And if you like to write like that you should keep writing in that way.
It would have been cool, although I know from experience that it kind of sucks when it actually happens. Hope the water goes down :)