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"my sacred spot" what a lovely epitaph. I feel thatIt's beautiful tragic and philosophical important that this identity crisis is happening at the narrator's "sacred spot." 

Strangers in the Night 6 months ago

Ahh all the imagery is so unique and tangible! Brilliant job with this. Love the rhythm! 

The Chaotic Misdemeanors of Bluejay One 6 months ago

"Simply being" what a beautiful way to describe the moon. It also, in some ways, gives everything that exists the potential to become a moon. 

The moon 6 months ago

This is so amazing and real. 

1,466,666,666 Women 6 months ago

Thank you! :)

Season of the Witch 6 months ago

You're welcome. I love the song! Also the drawing, keep up the good work. 

Season of the Witch 6 months ago

<3

1,466,666,666 Women 6 months ago

This is such an important topic that affects so many different women from around the world. Adding the calculated number really emphasizes just how massive the issue is. I also love your use of repetition and pacing. Keep up the good work <3

1,466,666,666 Women 6 months ago

Yes I do know that. Thanks for pointing it out though. 

Season of the Witch 6 months ago

I enjoyed your essay. I don't have much firsthand experience with youtube shorts, but I think it's crazy how much more time my younger siblings spend watching Netflix than I did, even though they're only a few years younger. It's scary to me how accessible fast-entertainment is becoming.

Tiny Write by Willow_tree1, October 10 2024 6 months ago