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I love this! You go into details that pulled me in right away and you smoothly transition one sentence into to the other!

I should have told him I loved him 11 months ago

Writing wasn't really a huge thing for me at first, it was just some silly hobby I had to let my creativity shine through other windows than just art- since art wasn't my strong suit. Eventually, I moved in the 6th grade to a small apartment complex and my mom stumbled across YWP in the newspaper. She read a little about it and thought it would suit me well. Then after signing up and making an account I got really into writing and wrote on here. 

I am very proud to be a part of this wonderful community of people and wish the very best to newcomers along the way! 

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 27 2023 11 months ago

I've done that before, many times. But some writings I haven't, some have a spark about them that I can't just redo. There's also something ever so welcoming about having mistakes and errors in your past writings, so when a month or 2 rolls around you can see where you were with your writings and how you used to write. Sometimes I'll look at other peoples writings and see a spelling mistake or grammar mistake, but I don't really notice it all that much because I'm not reading it to criticize- I'm there to read a possibly beautiful and life-changing writing. 

It also reminds me that I can make mistakes too and it's okay if a writing from yesterday isn't as good as one I could do today. 

Anyways, sorry for such a ramble. Hope you have a lovely rest of your week!

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, November 16 2023 11 months ago

This is AMAZING! The detail, especially on the shoes, is incredible!

A Little Bit Worse 11 months ago

Photographer’s note; the r_photography1326 watermark is my watermark on instagram! 

Blurry Vision 11 months ago

thank you so much!!

The Gift 11 months ago

Thank you. It means the world to me. And I’m really happy you enjoyed reading it the way I hoped. Also about the way I use line breaks is super sweet of you to say. I think it’s what shows to the reader how to capture the words in the perspective I wrote it in. 

Again, thank you so much, and hope you have a lovely evening. 

Sleep? We don’t know her 11 months ago

I feel like I could envision everything that was happening just by the dialogue! That’s so cool!

Smoke Signal 11 months ago

this was absolutely incredible. your writing style is positively gorgeous and I love the dark twist you added. 

Persephone 11 months ago

i loved dress coded! thanks for this recommendation, I hadn't seen the first rule of climate club so i'll check it out. :)

Book Club post by Popcorn, November 22 2023 11 months ago