The description in this poem is beautiful. I love the lines "My skin is covered by endless rows of goosebumps". I can picture this in my mind. Your use of boldness and line breaks is so creative and gives so much to the poem. This poem is beautiful and is full of emotion.
I love this poem and it is very relatable. I feel closest to the part when you said "Because I just need to say what I think, but it's two am, and when I wake up, my writing won't be that good after all." These lines have a lot of power behind them because it is true for a ton of people that when they write something so late at night they will be proud but then they look at it the next day with a new view and perspective and they hate it. for some, part of their revising technique is writing and then coming back the next day and adjusting what they did not like instead of deleting everything. This poem is beautiful and many people can relate to this.
they are definitely two of the most important people i know:)
The description in this poem is beautiful. I love the lines "My skin is covered by endless rows of goosebumps". I can picture this in my mind. Your use of boldness and line breaks is so creative and gives so much to the poem. This poem is beautiful and is full of emotion.
I loved reading this, it kept me on the edge on my seat. It was also incredible the way you made the characters come to life.
"a snow lamb as fired slabs." what an image!
This is SO good. I like the twist and how you defined imaginary in so many ways.
I feel like this image is so perfectly realistic, I can just picture the whole barn from looking at this drawing.
I often feel like more things should be explained better. Maybe we get stronger by having to figure them out? I don't know.
I love this poem and it is very relatable. I feel closest to the part when you said "Because I just need to say what I think, but it's two am, and when I wake up, my writing won't be that good after all." These lines have a lot of power behind them because it is true for a ton of people that when they write something so late at night they will be proud but then they look at it the next day with a new view and perspective and they hate it. for some, part of their revising technique is writing and then coming back the next day and adjusting what they did not like instead of deleting everything. This poem is beautiful and many people can relate to this.
Thank you so much for letting me know, it means a lot to hear that.
Thank you so much!