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Thank you so much! 

Gloomy 1 year ago

This is so good!! 

Gloomy 1 year ago

Trying to balance school and something else you love is always hard, and sadly does make anyone feel torn between the two. It can be hard to find a balance or needing to choose one. The picture really captures it well I think

Fork in the Road 1 year ago

I love the rhyming! I think it even adds to the narrator wondering about catching fireflies. Keep writing!

Firefly Catcher 1 year ago

oooo this was so good, especially the last paragraph. Agree with everything YellowS said. What a dark and bold retelling

Persephone 1 year ago

this is simply beautiful. What a stellar opening line too, congrats on the daily read

First Snow 1 year ago

this made me smile

Haunting Hands 1 year ago

This is so interesting I keeping finding ways to interpret each line and how they fit together. really makes you think. keep writing!

As the Crow Lands 1 year ago

hm agreed with TheDemiDevil, I didn't realzie poetry books have a bit of a narrative/story throughout the book, but going by that logic however many poems can fit into that story. My favorite book of poems was like 300 pages lol. Its the Random House Book of Poetry so I personally would say however many poems you think are interesting and fit together. Publishers might be looking for a specific number

Tiny Write by Writer1326, October 16 2023 1 year ago

Pinterst poetry/writing prompts. Or, sometimes I just don't write for a bit.

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 23 2023 1 year ago