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Awesome! That’s so cool!!!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 8 months ago

Thank you!!

Dinner With You 8 months ago

I really love this!  The words are so careful and true, and I was enraptured so quickly!  

Dinner With You 8 months ago

That's so fun! Thanks!

Tiny Write by Popcorn, May 19 2025 8 months ago

I like them too!! I do a thing with my friends a lot when we're bored in class - they give me 3 random words and I write them a short poem. it works super well for writer's block and I love walking through the hallways and seeing my poems taped up in people's lockers :D here's one if you want it: Menu. Mist. Defendant. Fortune. Breath.

Tiny Write by Popcorn, May 19 2025 8 months ago

yeah I agree with bumblebea & twoblueviolets, try having your MC kind of montage through some moments where he was being either obviously horrible (audience anger at a good read moment!) or more subtly bad (realization). hope your writing goes well!

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 8 months ago

omg congrats!!!!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 8 months ago

Francesca, I love this! From the vision of this piece down to the description, it's so beautiful in a meaningful way! 

Baby Blue 8 months ago

Thanks for your ideas! They are very helpful! :)

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 8 months ago

I personally love Brooklyn 99 because all the characters are amazing and also Gilmore girls because the humor is spot on 

Tiny Write by bumblebea, May 13 2025 8 months ago