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Hi! Thanks so much for your feedback. And right on! You're so lucky to just be discovering them, I would give anything to be able to listen to their music for the first time again. Enjoy!

mango 1 year ago

Thank you so much Yellow Sweater! I really appreciate your comments, they made my day. I just found out how to see the notifications, awesome user btw, you're the best!

The Messenger 1 year ago

Beautifully written! I was completely entranced. The end broke my heart in the best possible way! 

The Messenger 1 year ago

Yeah! If you're interested Robert Browning's The Laboratory, My Last Duchess, and Porphyria's Lover are good examples of Gothic poems! Emily Dickinson is an amazing example, too! Since most of her poems are about death and some include themes like mortality and immortality, her works can be considered Gothic! 

Tiny Write by Writer1326, October 6 2023 1 year ago

I honestly didn't even know Gothic poems were a thing! Never written any but I did read Frankenstein by Mary Shelley for class and I really liked it

Tiny Write by Writer1326, October 6 2023 1 year ago

Thank you!

Reach 1 year ago

I love this so much!!! It's so self aware...Philosophical and funny is the best mix.  This quote made me laugh out-loud because I've had the exact same though as your narrator: "After all, the 14-year-old version of her had decided that the worst thing you could be was boring, and she thought she should probably get back to that sentiment. 

Philosophies In Third Person 1 year ago

"No genus or genius" Nice word play!!

Falling Florets 1 year ago

This is so pretty! You're really good!

Seasonal Reflection 1 year ago

This poem was written to be interpreted in any way, though, to me when speaking of what’ll be left I interpret it as something Gothic like ghosts & the paranormal!

The Veil Between 1 year ago