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This is really impactful. I especially love the line "Her name is Hanna and she is the only thing that makes me uncertain of my first two certainties." It forces the reader to go back to the first 2 statements and process what you said, but with a new perspective. 

Certain 1 year ago

Talking with my family!

Tiny Write by maelynslavik, September 25 2023 1 year ago

Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. 

This poem is the very scripture of girlhood. I adore the line, "Piety is folding yourself into the girl you would want to date and the women you would want to marry". This is all so honest and true and so relatable. Wonderful job :)

Theology 1 year ago

Thank you, Anna :) I always appreciate your comments :)

Men and Dogs 1 year ago

I absolutely adore this poem. The imagery is incredible.

ps, love your pfp. My Bloody Valentine, right? I just discovered them a few days ago

mango 1 year ago

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Dancing In A Field Of Flowers 1 year ago

"Good things come to those who wait..." In this case that good thing is a hot apple pie, and you have described so well the tedious peeling process, a true exercise in patience and determination. I could feel it! Interesting descriptions of the minute actions you are taking with your hands, and many beautiful nods to the fall season.

Without Apples 1 year ago

amini, you are good enough! Grades are not everything; they are not what make us who we are. Have you seen Sayornis p.'s "Things to Remember"? I think they might have some words of wisdom for you: youngwritersproject.org/explore/writing/things-remember-pt-1

nothing but an A 1 year ago

Oo, that's a good one! I'll have to try it sometime. :)

Tiny Write by Yellow Sweater, October 2 2023 1 year ago

Your work inspires me, I'm unbelievably proud that you enjoy the rest of our work!

Tiny Write by IceGalaxy, September 24 2023 1 year ago