This is a relatable poem that caught my attention all the way through. I was able to picture the scenario perfectly through this poem and it brought me back to the feeling of procrastination. I found it very interesting how you broke up the lines, especially the lines "My ceiling, My windows, And my mirrors." giving them each their own line emphasizes certain words and this is something I feel more people should do. This poem is beautiful and so relatable!
I really enjoyed this poem, one thing that really stuck out to me was the line "That I was ink and glue and wax but mostly, I was made of papercuts" This concept is really cool to me and you phrased it so perfectly, I could feel myself becoming fully immersed in this poem during that line. I noticed how you ended every line with the same word twice, this made me very happy because it felt nice to read and it was a strong choice that added so much to your already amazing poem. This poem is so special and the ending words make it stand out all the more. This is a stunning poem, the choices of the words are so clear and inspiring!
I really enjoyed this poem, especially the first few lines, it set the tone of the poem very well. I also find it very cool how each first line of each section creates its own poem. you do an amazing job making it relatable and understandable well making it beautiful and so complex at the same time.
This is a beautiful poem connecting the ancient Samhain to modern Halloween! As someone learning about paganism, it means a lot to see the holidays talked about.
I enjoyed this so much! As someone who loves the moon, I absolutely love the way you compared human beings to the moon! You did an amazing job on this poem!
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Thank you so much Anna! That line is also my fav
This is a relatable poem that caught my attention all the way through. I was able to picture the scenario perfectly through this poem and it brought me back to the feeling of procrastination. I found it very interesting how you broke up the lines, especially the lines "My ceiling, My windows, And my mirrors." giving them each their own line emphasizes certain words and this is something I feel more people should do. This poem is beautiful and so relatable!
I really enjoyed this poem, one thing that really stuck out to me was the line "That I was ink and glue and wax but mostly, I was made of papercuts" This concept is really cool to me and you phrased it so perfectly, I could feel myself becoming fully immersed in this poem during that line. I noticed how you ended every line with the same word twice, this made me very happy because it felt nice to read and it was a strong choice that added so much to your already amazing poem. This poem is so special and the ending words make it stand out all the more. This is a stunning poem, the choices of the words are so clear and inspiring!
I really enjoyed this poem, especially the first few lines, it set the tone of the poem very well. I also find it very cool how each first line of each section creates its own poem. you do an amazing job making it relatable and understandable well making it beautiful and so complex at the same time.
My favorite technique in poetry is rhyming, metaphors, and similes!
Thank you! I love paganism, and wanted to share some information of Samhain & the origins of Halloween! :)
This is a beautiful poem connecting the ancient Samhain to modern Halloween! As someone learning about paganism, it means a lot to see the holidays talked about.
Thank you for writing this awesome piece.
I enjoyed this so much! As someone who loves the moon, I absolutely love the way you compared human beings to the moon! You did an amazing job on this poem!
"Three" is this week's featured visual art on vtdigger.org, out now in their Life & Culture section! Everyone check it out, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
"Theology" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, out now in their Life & Culture section! Everyone check it out, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture