To make a meaningful poem, write about feelings you’ve actually experienced, so it feels real and relatable. Use simple words that paint a clear picture, like describing emotions through things people can imagine. Don’t over explain something, and leave a little mystery so readers can connect it to their own lives.
There is so much distinct, dark, chaotic emotion displayed here, yet it all overlaps and intertwines together perfectly as a whole and creates amazing richness. The colors, the detail you included (those plaid pants--!), the smudging technique and scribbly style, they all work.
Sunsets are endlessly inspirational, and so too is the night sky, as you said! Looking up at the stars, discussing life, makes for a decidedly sweet and tranquil moment between characters. I like the simplicity of this scene.
By the way, I think "envelop" might be the word you're looking for ("elope" means to get spontaneously hitched).
I've read it! Great recommendation
YES they are so good!!!! but I need to read Nick&Charlie and This Winter, have you read those?
yess!! i loved radio silence and all of alice oseman's books!!
Thank you!
PS I want the system to involve animals.
To make a meaningful poem, write about feelings you’ve actually experienced, so it feels real and relatable. Use simple words that paint a clear picture, like describing emotions through things people can imagine. Don’t over explain something, and leave a little mystery so readers can connect it to their own lives.
I think I'll reread it!
yep, and thanks!! i'll make sure to edit it and keep that in mind :)
There is so much distinct, dark, chaotic emotion displayed here, yet it all overlaps and intertwines together perfectly as a whole and creates amazing richness. The colors, the detail you included (those plaid pants--!), the smudging technique and scribbly style, they all work.
Sunsets are endlessly inspirational, and so too is the night sky, as you said! Looking up at the stars, discussing life, makes for a decidedly sweet and tranquil moment between characters. I like the simplicity of this scene.
By the way, I think "envelop" might be the word you're looking for ("elope" means to get spontaneously hitched).