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Thanks, I took inspiration for it from a really talented poet who I look up to :)

Conflicting feelings 7 months ago

I like the impact of the last line. :)

Conflicting feelings 7 months ago

I love this! I like the fourth stanza in particular. :)

Caught in a storm 7 months ago

:)

Book Club post by QueenBee, October 9 2024 7 months ago

Happy birthday to my father, who's always been there for me. Love you always.

The Wolf On My Porch 7 months ago

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Crown of Flames 7 months ago

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The Song-Stoked Fire 7 months ago

Yes, basically each line. :)

Second, third, and hundreth chances 7 months ago

Very funny and surprisingly profound!

Short story - Behind the Sofa 7 months ago

Hi! A magic system revolving animals sounds so cool. If you're going for like a based around gods system, I suggest animal gods or if you're drawing on just magic, maybe the animals could help harness abilities or give magic users their abilities? Almost like a witch's familiar lol. I hope this helped and you don't have to take any of my ideas if they're bad lol, good luck writing!

Tiny Write by GhostSlayer, November 29 2024 7 months ago