This blew me away. What a natural flow, and original rhymes! You represented winter, spring, summer, and fall, all, so fully and colorfully, and effectively communicated that temporal nature of each passing season that begs us to experience each moment IN the moment.
This is truly so beautiful. I loved your use of metaphors and the raw anger and sadness the formation of the words made me feel. the way you write is so intimate and it reminds me of some of my own poems. my favorite part was when you wrote, "in another world, where I wasn't a blood forged fig; and everything wasn't forever my fault." I was never sure how to put that feeling into words, but your writing described it so beautifully!!
This blew me away. What a natural flow, and original rhymes! You represented winter, spring, summer, and fall, all, so fully and colorfully, and effectively communicated that temporal nature of each passing season that begs us to experience each moment IN the moment.
absolutely raw and gorgeous.
oh cool! i'd also recommend the heaven and earth grocery store and i'm glad my mom died too. :)
I love your poem; I can agree completely! Dr. M is the best ❤️
This is truly so beautiful. I loved your use of metaphors and the raw anger and sadness the formation of the words made me feel. the way you write is so intimate and it reminds me of some of my own poems. my favorite part was when you wrote, "in another world, where I wasn't a blood forged fig; and everything wasn't forever my fault." I was never sure how to put that feeling into words, but your writing described it so beautifully!!
This is amazing. It makes me angry, for you and for me and for all the other women in the world who are not being heard the way they deserve.
This made me cry
real
i actually already read this and its why i got into memoir! excellent taste :)
Thank you!!