The ending stanza is a perfect ending to such an amazing and thoughtful piece. I had to read it twice it was so lovely. I love how you open with the same first two lines and switch them. Keep writing!
Talk slow and pick someone in the audience who you look at for the whole time. This may sound creepy but it defiantly helps. Also try to look like you're having fun.
It's a great poem! My biggest tip is to not rush it. I know when I get nervous during any kind of public speaking I go really fast but just practice a lot and good luck!
Hi! I don't read a lot of poetry in front of people but I do a lot of public speaking and preforming and my biggest piece of advice is too look at the people you are talking to and take your time.
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I love this. Writing is so freeing and a great way to escape and explore so many things. Keep writing :)
The ending stanza is a perfect ending to such an amazing and thoughtful piece. I had to read it twice it was so lovely. I love how you open with the same first two lines and switch them. Keep writing!
"I've built my salt circle to hide from your demons" is a fantastic line. I love it. Keep writing!
I love the line breaks in this, it seems to tumble into the next line. Keep writing!
Talk slow and pick someone in the audience who you look at for the whole time. This may sound creepy but it defiantly helps. Also try to look like you're having fun.
Thank you so much!!
It's a great poem! My biggest tip is to not rush it. I know when I get nervous during any kind of public speaking I go really fast but just practice a lot and good luck!
Thank you!
Hi! I don't read a lot of poetry in front of people but I do a lot of public speaking and preforming and my biggest piece of advice is too look at the people you are talking to and take your time.
"Beach" is this week's featured photo on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everyone can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture