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This whole poem is just beautiful!!! The way you used repetition is simply perfect.

Every 11 months ago

This looks like a professional photographer took these photos. This is amazing. 

Sunset 11 months ago

I like the message of the poem, it's a very interesting point of view and it's very moving. 

Uncle Sam. (Fourth of July) 11 months ago

The colors of these are insane!

Sunset 11 months ago

Thanks! The next five poems tell a story about two characters in my book series. One was murdered, and each poem represents one of the five stages of grief the other goes through. I researched the five stages, so it should be somewhat accurate. 'The sunset' becomes a metaphor often used in the next few poems. 

The Sunrise 11 months ago

THANK YOU SO MUCH! I really love Gay's works and I think everyone should be able to revel in their own delight!

Delights 11 months ago

Oh, thank you so much! I personally find time travel, especially in movies like the third Harry Potter (seriously, WHY, JK Rowling) so freaking annoying, so I hope someone is able to create something excellent with the right prompt!

time travelers 11 months ago

thank you so much!

Main Character 11 months ago

AAAAH THANK YOU SO MUCH!

went strawberry picking today 11 months ago

Thanks!

Purple 11 months ago