Eek! I let myself get a little caught up in the headiness and fervor of this piece, I'm also trembling with excitement for summer now. I could almost hear those birds, smell those lilacs! That steady old English-teacher lesson of show, don't tell has clearly rubbed off on your writing in the best way, don't lose that!
Eek! I let myself get a little caught up in the headiness and fervor of this piece, I'm also trembling with excitement for summer now. I could almost hear those birds, smell those lilacs! That steady old English-teacher lesson of show, don't tell has clearly rubbed off on your writing in the best way, don't lose that!
I really like this poem, and I can totally relate! I don't like summer either, but I always end up longing for it.
Thank you
I read Heartless and its so good <3
I would recommend the Renegades series.
gahhh that's an amazing idea I would totally respond to
You're welcome
Nice - I've just gotta read the third&fourth!
This is wonderful! This poem is reviving. Keep it up!! :)
So beautiful! It reminds me of the Painted Desert in Arizona.