This is so beautiful!! The descriptions are breathtaking, and I had to read it over twice because of how much I loved it! Also I can't believe you're only 11--this seems like something that could be in an anthology written by adults!! :)
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece even though it sort of felt like a confession I wasn't supposed to make. And thanks for noticing the prose style! :D
Your message really resonates with me, because I'm always trying to remind myself that someone else may just be having a bad day and deserve some grace for their words or actions. But you're right: You're not obligated to forget, or forgive (a message that many people preach as virtuous, but is a personal choice, I firmly believe). The set-up of the conversation between prey and predator to communicate that idea was an intelligent and effective format choice.
Oki!
Sorry for the late reply. I'm not the one who wrote the tag but there's a bunch of them all around Austin Texas. Really insperational message though!
This is so beautiful!! The descriptions are breathtaking, and I had to read it over twice because of how much I loved it! Also I can't believe you're only 11--this seems like something that could be in an anthology written by adults!! :)
beautiful & hauntingly true. love the line breaks. <3
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece even though it sort of felt like a confession I wasn't supposed to make. And thanks for noticing the prose style! :D
Thanks so much! It means a lot to me that you connect with my work!
i read it a month ago!! i really enjoyed it and the concept was cool :)
That's true, it might not be enough but we all have to try. Only then do we have a chance
This is so amazingly cool!
Your message really resonates with me, because I'm always trying to remind myself that someone else may just be having a bad day and deserve some grace for their words or actions. But you're right: You're not obligated to forget, or forgive (a message that many people preach as virtuous, but is a personal choice, I firmly believe). The set-up of the conversation between prey and predator to communicate that idea was an intelligent and effective format choice.