I absolutely love the way this is written. Nothing stands out to me as inherently wrong. You could add a little more detail, and I feel like we learn a lot about Izima, but not much about Em.
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"Watching" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everybody can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
What an absolute UNIT of a cookie! I'm digging this interpretation of cookies and milk, I've never seen a drop cookie like this before! The heart adds the perfect little touch.
Oh my gosh, I didn't even realize this was in response to the Five challenge at first. This vocabulary fits in flawlessly, not forced at all! This is exactly how I remember my days at summer camp, too: filled with purpose, though I didn't realize it at the time.
I agree! I really enjoyed the chapter. The shorter perspectives make you pay attention more, and it gives each paragraph - each word - more power.
If I’m having writer’s block, I usually start by writing something that I know. Something meaningful to me, or something that’s happening around me.
Thank you!
This is so true!
Thank you! I feel like we learn so much when we're not trying to at all.
I absolutely love the way this is written. Nothing stands out to me as inherently wrong. You could add a little more detail, and I feel like we learn a lot about Izima, but not much about Em.
"Sun Through the Rain" is this week's featured visual art on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everybody can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
"Watching" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everybody can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
What an absolute UNIT of a cookie! I'm digging this interpretation of cookies and milk, I've never seen a drop cookie like this before! The heart adds the perfect little touch.
Oh my gosh, I didn't even realize this was in response to the Five challenge at first. This vocabulary fits in flawlessly, not forced at all! This is exactly how I remember my days at summer camp, too: filled with purpose, though I didn't realize it at the time.