"Wearing your heart on your sleeve and letting everyone know how you feel...writing with a knife is painful and yet exactly what I need," a powerful line to end a powerful piece
I also write scripts, but for plays instead of films, and I don't have a lot of experience so idk if this will actually be helpful? You could try having someone else be present as you're writing it and give feedback in the moment, as that is more helpful then when you're finished; and you can think about putting as much emotion as you can into your characters. I also try to write my dialogue as how I think these specific characters would really talk, and sometimes that helps! I also bet that you are a very good script writer because all of writing is cliches and audiences do enjoy seeing a storyline they can recognize and relate to!! Hope this is worthy info :D happy writing!!!
this gave me chills I LOVE this. "I'll vomit out old tears" and the imagery of all the memories you'll taste from that old Snapple. It's a gorgeous musing
Ooo, this reminds me of stained glass (of an abstract kind). My high school art teacher assigned us a project like this once too, and I remember it being very relaxing to color in.
"Wearing your heart on your sleeve and letting everyone know how you feel...writing with a knife is painful and yet exactly what I need," a powerful line to end a powerful piece
This made me smile, what a lovely image. Keep writing!
This is so, so incredible. As soon as I finished liking it, I had to just read it again. Everything in this is so thoughtful and beautiful; I love it!
Thank you so much, I really appreciate it!
i wish i could live there
I also write scripts, but for plays instead of films, and I don't have a lot of experience so idk if this will actually be helpful? You could try having someone else be present as you're writing it and give feedback in the moment, as that is more helpful then when you're finished; and you can think about putting as much emotion as you can into your characters. I also try to write my dialogue as how I think these specific characters would really talk, and sometimes that helps! I also bet that you are a very good script writer because all of writing is cliches and audiences do enjoy seeing a storyline they can recognize and relate to!! Hope this is worthy info :D happy writing!!!
This is so cool!!! I love how the frost even looks like stars
this gave me chills I LOVE this. "I'll vomit out old tears" and the imagery of all the memories you'll taste from that old Snapple. It's a gorgeous musing
Thank you!
Ooo, this reminds me of stained glass (of an abstract kind). My high school art teacher assigned us a project like this once too, and I remember it being very relaxing to color in.