This is so sweet (without being gooey)! I like that you make reference to familial and platonic love; it enhances what you're trying to communicate about romantic love. I wish you and your partner well!
I think I'm with you, I think I'd choose to be a fox as well! Such sly and mysterious creatures... When I picture them, it's dancing in the moonlight, too. "Wild life" vs. "wildlife" is a clever distinction.
UGH, this is so gut-wrenchingly good. The shortness of the poem keeps from how beautifully you worded your thoughts. This perfectly describes how I also connect to nature and almost gives notes of childhood wonder (at least that's what I gained.) The fourth stanza is my favorite; even in the dying leaves, there is sweetness. Wonderful job!
Ah your prose is so so so good! And this is the loveliest scene. You capture the feeling of childhood summers in a small town so well. Made me ever more nostolgic than I already was (which I didn't think possible)
This is so sweet (without being gooey)! I like that you make reference to familial and platonic love; it enhances what you're trying to communicate about romantic love. I wish you and your partner well!
Oh gosh, whereabouts were you driving through? I'm glad you made it home safe!
I think I'm with you, I think I'd choose to be a fox as well! Such sly and mysterious creatures... When I picture them, it's dancing in the moonlight, too. "Wild life" vs. "wildlife" is a clever distinction.
Heart-warming and sweet. I only hope she knows your graciousness; if not, it is known in this poem. Great job :)
Thank you so much, Anna!! I'm glad you noticed the loop :)
UGH, this is so gut-wrenchingly good. The shortness of the poem keeps from how beautifully you worded your thoughts. This perfectly describes how I also connect to nature and almost gives notes of childhood wonder (at least that's what I gained.) The fourth stanza is my favorite; even in the dying leaves, there is sweetness. Wonderful job!
What a great shot! Love the reflection on the car hood --- gives the whole thing a dream like quality!
Ah your prose is so so so good! And this is the loveliest scene. You capture the feeling of childhood summers in a small town so well. Made me ever more nostolgic than I already was (which I didn't think possible)
This is such a cool idea!
Thank you, that means a lot