Oh my goodness, thank you for your amazing comment! I admire you as a writer as well and love reading your work. I will definitely never let my love of poetry fizzle out, and will try to push myself to submit to contests and magazines more. Thank you so much for the feedback on this poem, too! I am always looking to improve!
I really liked this poem. It expresses the intangible nature of dreams in such an ethereal way. It reminded me of some of my own dreams and brought forth images that I forgot until they all came crashing back.
I love books where the character goes on a quest. I feel like those plot lines are always pretty successful and easy to plan. It's relatively simple, too so you can add a lot of your own spin.
Thank you!
Oh my goodness, thank you for your amazing comment! I admire you as a writer as well and love reading your work. I will definitely never let my love of poetry fizzle out, and will try to push myself to submit to contests and magazines more. Thank you so much for the feedback on this poem, too! I am always looking to improve!
I really liked this poem. It expresses the intangible nature of dreams in such an ethereal way. It reminded me of some of my own dreams and brought forth images that I forgot until they all came crashing back.
thanks for the recommendation!! :)
I love this! The rhythm is so captivating. :)
Such a beautiful poem. :)
I love the rhymes and structure so much! Such a good poem. :)
Short but powerful! :)
This is soooo good! I love this poem. :)
I love books where the character goes on a quest. I feel like those plot lines are always pretty successful and easy to plan. It's relatively simple, too so you can add a lot of your own spin.