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UGH, this is so gut-wrenchingly good. The shortness of the poem keeps from how beautifully you worded your thoughts. This perfectly describes how I also connect to nature and almost gives notes of childhood wonder (at least that's what I gained.) The fourth stanza is my favorite; even in the dying leaves, there is sweetness. Wonderful job!

Autumn Forest Goddess 1 year ago

What a great shot! Love the reflection on the car hood --- gives the whole thing a dream like quality! 

Autumn driving 1 year ago

Ah your prose is so so so good! And this is the loveliest scene. You capture the feeling of childhood summers in a small town so well. Made me ever more nostolgic than I already was (which I didn't think possible) 

Bullets on Bikes 1 year ago

This is such a cool idea! 

my ghost 1 year ago

Thank you, that means a lot 

I don't know anymore 1 year ago

This warmed my heart. You've given your past and your present self the best advice there is to give, and even if you can't see your path yet, you'll find your way, just as you say. I wish you well on your journey of self-discovery!

To the little girl with big dreams 1 year ago

This is a true rainbow leaf: It features all the colors of fall! So pretty!

Maple 1 year ago

The warty ones are always my favorites!

Pumpkin picking 1 year ago

This piece is so whimsical! It took me right back to childhood and all the pranks I pulled and shenanigans I got up to with friends, especially during the dog days of summer. I really came to believe in this friendship you painted, too; it was easy to imagine these two huddled together, scheming...

Bullets on Bikes 1 year ago

This is a beautiful poem! I love all of the repetition. :)

I don't know anymore 1 year ago