It is ironic that we are addicted to phones which tell us not to be addicted to them. It's a bit of a paradox. I love your line breaks in this and how this flows so well together and sounds so pensive. Amazing piece, keep writing
This is POWERFUL. "Can I become everything you hate / so that I can love myself?" is a stand out line. I really see this as a spoken word poem. Love it. Keep writing!
thank you so much!!
It is ironic that we are addicted to phones which tell us not to be addicted to them. It's a bit of a paradox. I love your line breaks in this and how this flows so well together and sounds so pensive. Amazing piece, keep writing
This is POWERFUL. "Can I become everything you hate / so that I can love myself?" is a stand out line. I really see this as a spoken word poem. Love it. Keep writing!
What a lovely haiku. Keep writing!
Beautiful and haunting, as always :D
Thanks!
Thank you!!
ooh i like this metaphor!!
thank you!! yeah this happened a few days ago and i was like dumbstruck so obviously had to write a poem lol
wow thank you so much!!!!! maybe i will write some more haha :p