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Thank you!

Thanks! I feel like sometimes you realize that the moment where and when you are is a perfect photo, and this was totally one of those moments.

I just wrote a poem about a really hard breakup I went through, and here’s some lines that really stood out to me:

I tried to be enough for you

But this could never be.

When you left me

You tore out my heart.

I gave you my trust

And you lied to my face.

I struggle to heal

From this hole in my chest.

It holds me back

Just like you did

As I try to progress

In my relationships.

Hi, here's a few lines I wrote recently:
 

It’s been over two years now

But some nights

It feels like there’s a

Gaping wound

In my heart

Shredding me to pieces from the inside

Beautiful collection of observations. I particularly like that first stanza! 

Brilliant twist at the end. And an excellent exegesis of the psychology of storytelling! 

Wow, this is incredible!

Thank you

This  poem was inspired by this photo: https://collections.artsmia.org/art/105014/charles-alec-william-soth

Thanks!