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Wow, you can see every last little hair and whisker! Amazing attention to detail!

Little Doughnut 3 months ago

Yes, I hope that you do! This piece touches on the darkness -- it doesn't shy away from it -- but it ends on such a positive note, with such an appreciation for the beauty in life. I can't wait to see how the others play with these themes as well.

The Sunset 3 months ago

"So simple a concept yet so complex in its effects..." Spot-on. Some ways we grow to miss people and honor their memories are very specific to them, but some things are universal -- like that feeling of your house losing the status of "home," without that special person to occupy it with you -- and it's the latter you build upon in this piece. I find this all so relatable, when it comes to loss.

Missing You 3 months ago

Whatever it is that's ailing your soul, you're obviously stronger than you know! Keep fighting on, keep writing about it!

day one 3 months ago

"Contrast" is this week's featured visual art on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section! Check it out now! vtdigger.org/life-culture

Contrast 3 months ago

"Went Strawberry-Picking Today" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section! Check it out now! vtdigger.org/life-culture

went strawberry picking today 3 months ago

Thank you! (You got an exclamation point.)

Warm Colors 3 months ago

I really like the green shaded one!

Mother Nature - Womane 3 months ago

The colors of the popsicle are so good, and the color of your nails is honestly so perfect with them to!

Warm Colors 3 months ago

I also wrote a six-poem collection to go with this poem, should I add it to YWP as well?

The Sunset 3 months ago