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This is so, so amazing!!  All throughout, I was excited as to what I would get to read next in the poem

remember not understanding what red white and blue meant 3 months ago

Thank you! I wasnt really sure if that paragraph really hit or was just corny so this assured me a bit lol

Women's struggle is not their weakness 3 months ago

Thank you! It is, so we can avoid women in the present and future from getting hurt.

Women's struggle is not their weakness 3 months ago

Thanks :)

Sinews 3 months ago

This is such a cool take in the challenge!!  A beautiful poem as well

Sinews 3 months ago

this whole thing is amazing especially this paragraph, 
We are iron dressed in cotton, we are strength made of empathy, power made of care, we are the ones who stand back up after being pushed down again and again. We are the mothers of revolution and the daughters of silence. 

Women's struggle is not their weakness 3 months ago

Nice work on this. I think it totally captures a deep emotion that women feel really often. It's important to get this problem addressed. Because its really not okay. But anyway, this is really good.

Women's struggle is not their weakness 3 months ago

Thanks!! 

Tiny Write by June, July 29 2025 3 months ago

this is amazing!

Declan. 3 months ago

This is incredible, I love it so much!  It feels so close to your heart, and I felt like it brought me closer to mine.  My sister leaves for college soon, and this was such a wonderful thing to read :)

Declan. 3 months ago