Amazing poem. "Here, defeat is a chain; binding the future tight, closing the door before it can open." I saw exactly that when read this. Your line breaks are awesome. Keep writing
I want to print this and pin it to my refrigerator, or frame it on a wall. The rhyming is amazing and the flow of the piece is lovely. I love every stanza. "Pretty like the mountains tall / The hills wild and untamed / Pretty like the city lights / Stars of another name" gave such strong imagery. Lovely piece, keep writing!
Truly this is an awesome structure to work with!
Hearing that feed back makes me unbelievably happy, thank you so much! This is the first poem ive written like this but maybe ill write more!
amazing in the most poignant and tounching way
Thank you so much! :)
Wow that is majestic! It looks like a Bob Ross painting!
Thanks!
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)
Thank you so much!!
Amazing poem. "Here, defeat is a chain; binding the future tight, closing the door before it can open." I saw exactly that when read this. Your line breaks are awesome. Keep writing
I want to print this and pin it to my refrigerator, or frame it on a wall. The rhyming is amazing and the flow of the piece is lovely. I love every stanza. "Pretty like the mountains tall / The hills wild and untamed / Pretty like the city lights / Stars of another name" gave such strong imagery. Lovely piece, keep writing!