This is beautiful. Burdens of life tend to stack up more and more throughout each season of life. in Essence, aging is grieving all the years before and the perspectives we lacked that made us more innocent. You have an amazing way with words and your metaphors are incredible!
I love this poem so much! I might be wrong, but it kind of feels like a poem about OCD, even if it's not it is still so good! Love the routine-likeness of it. :)
Beautiful, short, and piercing. "We did enough to be us"
This is beautiful. Burdens of life tend to stack up more and more throughout each season of life. in Essence, aging is grieving all the years before and the perspectives we lacked that made us more innocent. You have an amazing way with words and your metaphors are incredible!
Thank you!!
nice!
haha, lol. love your username! I am also a fool with a pen, identifying as a poet. :)
That looks so cool!!
have to say I'm a fan of fools :)
Thanks!
Which college are you going to if you don't mind me asking?
I love this poem so much! I might be wrong, but it kind of feels like a poem about OCD, even if it's not it is still so good! Love the routine-likeness of it. :)