Taking down for now. Revision in progress!!
Into Dust
More by star
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Pyrite
*lines in italics are from Jane Eyre
Are you apprehensive of the new sphere you are about to enter?
Because I fear
For the warm skin
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Maryn (haikus)
It's sand, mud and dirt
but some see the blue beyond
and call it a beach.
She almost forgets.
Summer nights still taste like smoke
and fireflies still dance.
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You, as the snow was melting
The snow was melting
when you talked to me
when they talked to you
when we stood with them
and their thinning perfume
their black backpacks
their straightened hair
their plans of the ride home.
Comments
this is really really good!!!! i love the unfinished ending and the real feel of summer
aw thanks! i have a lot to revise lol
if u think so but i loved it how it was! can't wait to see the revision :)
I was so invested in this. You capture emotions so beautifully!
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