What a picture this paints in my head! I feel I can really see her, hopping between the stars. The poetic choices you made -- the italicization, capitalizations, and single-word lines -- all added to the whimsical twinkle of the character and the piece as a whole.
This fills me with so much joy! What a treasure a good friend can be. I love to see the different kinds of love explored, because I don't think they're touched on enough in popular media -- and truly, the affection we have for a friend can be just as fierce and loyal and brimming as romantic love. You've clearly proven so!
You are very welcome, you deserve it! And I am in the same predicament. Try thinking about, like, what is Aily going to think next? Is one of the Aldridges going to join her or are they going to set up their own hunt? Will there be a public/private funeral or will the deaths be hushed up, making it even more of an emotional uphill climb for anyone as they attempt to find out who did it? Sorry, that got into a rant; don't let me take over your story, but I hope that helped!
What a picture this paints in my head! I feel I can really see her, hopping between the stars. The poetic choices you made -- the italicization, capitalizations, and single-word lines -- all added to the whimsical twinkle of the character and the piece as a whole.
This fills me with so much joy! What a treasure a good friend can be. I love to see the different kinds of love explored, because I don't think they're touched on enough in popular media -- and truly, the affection we have for a friend can be just as fierce and loyal and brimming as romantic love. You've clearly proven so!
Your welcome!
You are very welcome, you deserve it! And I am in the same predicament. Try thinking about, like, what is Aily going to think next? Is one of the Aldridges going to join her or are they going to set up their own hunt? Will there be a public/private funeral or will the deaths be hushed up, making it even more of an emotional uphill climb for anyone as they attempt to find out who did it? Sorry, that got into a rant; don't let me take over your story, but I hope that helped!
Omg thank you, this means the world to me!! Hopefully I'll post the next chapters soon, I'm in a bit of a writing slump :P
ikr? it was super cool in person too, tysm!!
ikr? It’s was super cool in person too, tysm!!
:DD thank you!
that’s a super interesting perspective- i love it, thank you!
thank you so much, means a lot :D