The visual of this hits deeply with its message. You don't even have to read it to understand the tone, it's beautiful.
Truly this is an awesome structure to work with!
Hearing that feed back makes me unbelievably happy, thank you so much! This is the first poem ive written like this but maybe ill write more!
amazing in the most poignant and tounching way
Thank you so much! :)
Wow that is majestic! It looks like a Bob Ross painting!
Thanks!
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)
Thank you so much!!
Amazing poem. "Here, defeat is a chain; binding the future tight, closing the door before it can open." I saw exactly that when read this. Your line breaks are awesome. Keep writing
The visual of this hits deeply with its message. You don't even have to read it to understand the tone, it's beautiful.
Truly this is an awesome structure to work with!
Hearing that feed back makes me unbelievably happy, thank you so much! This is the first poem ive written like this but maybe ill write more!
amazing in the most poignant and tounching way
Thank you so much! :)
Wow that is majestic! It looks like a Bob Ross painting!
Thanks!
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)
Thank you so much!!
Amazing poem. "Here, defeat is a chain; binding the future tight, closing the door before it can open." I saw exactly that when read this. Your line breaks are awesome. Keep writing