"Who reads books like she’s starving and the words are big, juicy cheeseburgers" is my favorite line. I wish I could mountain bike. Lovely piece, and I love the ending. Keep writing!
Incredible and metaphorically so interesting to think about, the way that we try to have control and sometimes find ourselves realizing what little we sometimes can control. "i might just realize that the reflection of air i see is a crystal dome capturing my little world." This is awesome. Keep writing
Ooh, I love this. Powerful and cleverly eloquent. I love pieces that talk directly to the person, and you executed this perfectly. This one left an impression on me. Amazing. Keep Writing
I feel like this should be in a fairytale book, and I can't believe I had the pleasure of reading this on this website. The voice in this story is so unique, and the way you form your sentences is exquisite. I'd read a whole book filled with these stories, seriously. Keep writing
"Who reads books like she’s starving and the words are big, juicy cheeseburgers" is my favorite line. I wish I could mountain bike. Lovely piece, and I love the ending. Keep writing!
Incredible and metaphorically so interesting to think about, the way that we try to have control and sometimes find ourselves realizing what little we sometimes can control. "i might just realize that the reflection of air i see is a crystal dome capturing my little world." This is awesome. Keep writing
Ooh, I love this. Powerful and cleverly eloquent. I love pieces that talk directly to the person, and you executed this perfectly. This one left an impression on me. Amazing. Keep Writing
Amazing. Can't wait for the next one!
Thank you!
Thank you so much! I had a ton of fun writing it, and definitely plan on writing more :)
Thank you so much!
I love this chorus!
I feel like this should be in a fairytale book, and I can't believe I had the pleasure of reading this on this website. The voice in this story is so unique, and the way you form your sentences is exquisite. I'd read a whole book filled with these stories, seriously. Keep writing
This made me smile and feel a little nostalgic for some reason. Lovely piece. Keep writing