I had to read this a few times and I found a new thing to love about it each time. "Incomprehensible grandness of it all" and "the weight of a thousand suns" are both very compelling lines. Keep writing!
This gave me goosebumps. What a beautiful peace about hope. Your visuals are so clear. I could really see the soil coming back to life, the seeds growing roots, each person contributing a little of what they had. The ending made me smile and reminded me of that feeling. Lovely piece, keep writing!
idk if it's related to the equinox, but my town does a festival in October called Cider Days where they have food vendors and a cider press with fresh hot cider. They raise money for my school, sell free maple creemees, and the businesses are open! It's really fun.
I had to read this a few times and I found a new thing to love about it each time. "Incomprehensible grandness of it all" and "the weight of a thousand suns" are both very compelling lines. Keep writing!
Ah, a paradox. "The people built the wall / With their hands in their pockets" is such a good line. Keep writing
This gave me goosebumps. What a beautiful peace about hope. Your visuals are so clear. I could really see the soil coming back to life, the seeds growing roots, each person contributing a little of what they had. The ending made me smile and reminded me of that feeling. Lovely piece, keep writing!
Thank you so much!
Nice! (At first I thought you lived in VT but now i see you are from Ohio!)
If I'm ever up near Vermont during October, I'll make a note to go check it out :)
yeah! Its in Mount Holly VT.
Omg that sounds so fun! What a lovely tradition
thank you so much!!
idk if it's related to the equinox, but my town does a festival in October called Cider Days where they have food vendors and a cider press with fresh hot cider. They raise money for my school, sell free maple creemees, and the businesses are open! It's really fun.