Oh my gosh - The Hate U Give is SUCH a good book! I read the book right before we watched the movie, and it was stunning. I don't think there's a sequel, but if there is, I hope it's as good as the first!
It is ironic that we are addicted to phones which tell us not to be addicted to them. It's a bit of a paradox. I love your line breaks in this and how this flows so well together and sounds so pensive. Amazing piece, keep writing
This is POWERFUL. "Can I become everything you hate / so that I can love myself?" is a stand out line. I really see this as a spoken word poem. Love it. Keep writing!
Oh my gosh - The Hate U Give is SUCH a good book! I read the book right before we watched the movie, and it was stunning. I don't think there's a sequel, but if there is, I hope it's as good as the first!
Listening to my neighbors set off fireworks for the new year :) I forgot that it was the autumnal equinox
thank you so much!!
It is ironic that we are addicted to phones which tell us not to be addicted to them. It's a bit of a paradox. I love your line breaks in this and how this flows so well together and sounds so pensive. Amazing piece, keep writing
This is POWERFUL. "Can I become everything you hate / so that I can love myself?" is a stand out line. I really see this as a spoken word poem. Love it. Keep writing!
What a lovely haiku. Keep writing!
Beautiful and haunting, as always :D
Thanks!
Thank you!!
ooh i like this metaphor!!